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February 19
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Pros: This manipulation has a good compositional placement which follows the rule of 2/3rds. I also feel that having an isolated area of color saturation on the woman carrying the lamp is creating good contrast and thus good focus.

Cons: I feel that could be changed is the background which I feel is too dark which in turn is flattening out your image. I would suggest lighting the background up about 5% and this will create a stronger background. Lastly you have a background and middle ground but no foreground. I would suggest adding something to the foreground like more mushrooms or something in the forest for added depth.
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~gangstalike Mar 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is haunting and beautiful :] this picture seems to tell a story
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*oos78 Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. This picture really tell story, story is in my head. Every my works tells a story ;)
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~inscynis Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very lovely work! I love the fog and the contrast of the light. The little boy is very... little compared to the birds and the trees, but I guess he could be a very literally little boy. But great job! :meow:
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=Crewations Feb 20, 2013   Digital Artist
Beautiful piece! :clap:
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*oos78 Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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~NervousReality Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice job!
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*oos78 Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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Like it too! Though I wonder if there is too mcuh empty space to the right?! Just maybe there should be some hint of something lurking under the tree trunk!!? :-)
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*oos78 Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm, its true
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~Gejda Feb 20, 2013   Digital Artist
Nicely done! :D Love the contrast between the small character illuminated by warm light and the cold, dark background. To be honest, I haven't noticed the woman behind a tree at first glance, but now that I see her I think I can safely say that she perfectly fits with the slightly mysterious, quiet atmosphere. Both the concept and its execution are great. Wonderful job!
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